Comments on: As it slowly awakens http://jantar.darkervision.com/2009/04/i-watch-your-hand-now-as-it-slowly-awakens/ various poems & short stories Mon, 08 Aug 2011 21:54:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Jantar http://jantar.darkervision.com/2009/04/i-watch-your-hand-now-as-it-slowly-awakens/comment-page-1/#comment-21038 Jantar Sun, 16 Jan 2011 02:22:30 +0000 http://jantar.darkervision.com/?p=464#comment-21038 Thank you - truly but you do need to read more. I'm no good doing humble but you do need to go out more. Try Jane Hirhsfield, for instance, or Lorca, or Neruda, or so many others, truly. (Eliot, with the Love Song of Alfred J Prufrock). Anyway, it's hard to tell if any reaction to a post is by a real person or by some spam bot. I'd like to think you are a person who liked the poem. If so, I'd like to talk a bit more. If you are real and liked the poem: Thank you, truly, Jan. Thank you – truly but you do need to read more. I’m no good doing humble but you do need to go out more.
Try Jane Hirhsfield, for instance, or Lorca, or Neruda, or so many others, truly. (Eliot, with the Love Song of Alfred J Prufrock).

Anyway, it’s hard to tell if any reaction to a post is by a real person or by some spam bot. I’d like to think you are a person who liked the poem. If so, I’d like to talk a bit more.
If you are real and liked the poem: Thank you, truly,
Jan.

]]> By: Ariadne http://jantar.darkervision.com/2009/04/i-watch-your-hand-now-as-it-slowly-awakens/comment-page-1/#comment-21036 Ariadne Sun, 16 Jan 2011 01:37:13 +0000 http://jantar.darkervision.com/?p=464#comment-21036 I don't think I've ever read anything so... perfect. I don’t think I’ve ever read anything so… perfect.

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